Persuasive writing

In class we are doing something called persuasive writing. persuasive writing is something you write to get someone’s attention to get something you want to change. check out this persuasive paragraph that I wrote.♥  

  I think we should get more than one recess. It would be awesome if we had more than one recess think about it we would get double play time and if you didn’t finish a game at one recess you can finish it at the other recess,  your problem is solved you can play one at one recess and one at the other. I think it would be really cool if we had more than one recess do you think comment your thought do you think it would be cool or do you think it wouldn’t be so great

from,

Olivia 

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